[Ietf-calsify] IETF Review of rfc2446bis-07

[Reinhold Kainhofer]

Am Montag, 8. September 2008 schrieb Reinhold Kainhofer:
> Here is my review, where I mention all issues / questions sequentially,
> ordered as they appear in the draft (thus mixing errors with open questions
> and suggestings).

I just noticed one more minor issue:
In section "4.4.7 Add A New Series of Instances To A Recurring Event" we use 
>>(they are both "VEVENTS")<<. As I didn't find any other instance where 
VEVENT is pluralized (Actually, in rfc 2447bis, there is a splot where VEVENT 
is explictly used where a plural is expected, see the bottom of p.7 of 
rfc2447bis-07), I don't think we should do it here, either. I think it's best 
to always stay with VEVENT in its singular form. Thus, I would change this to 
>>(they are both a "VEVENT")<<

Cheers,
Reinhold

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